Talk:Chapter 8 - HUMANITY

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Comments on Chapter 8 - HUMANITY


ITABASHI said ...

The section called "HISTORY OF MANKIND "needs corrections and/or clarifications . The statement " About 50,000 years ago , the Pleja System finally found peace and libert.But shortly before this time ..." is incorrect if the corrected date for the arrival of Pelegon was 190 ,000 BC. It was a long time before . The rest of the narrative does not follow either as it seems that only s short time elapsed from the arrival of Pelegon to the arrival of Arus . Vey confusing?


--ITABASHI (talk), 14:22, 30 October 2012 (GMT)

ITABASHI said ...

The section called "HISTORY OF MANKIND "needs corrections and/or clarifications . The statement " About 50,000 years ago , the Pleja System finally found peace and libert.But shortly before this time ..." is incorrect if the corrected date for the arrival of Pelegon was 190 ,000 BC. It was a long time before . The rest of the narrative does not follow either as it seems that only s short time elapsed from the arrival of Pelegon to the arrival of Arus . Vey confusing?


--ITABASHI (talk), 14:22, 30 October 2012 (GMT)